Mountain Elevation…(trio)

mountain elevation –

Coachella Valley at the tip

of brushstrokes

mountain elevation –

a span of wings connect

cliff to cloud

mountain elevation –

my breath in the presence

of deities

photo and words: L. Cooper

4 thoughts on “Mountain Elevation…(trio)

  1. Beautiful! The first trio is as a painting “with brushstokes”, the second is the union of earth and heaven, and the third one is higher step towards the spiritual element where the voice of the poem feels connected with god(s).

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  2. The idea of progressive elevation after each three verses reminds me of Dante Alighieri’s The Divine Comedy, where he comes out of The Inferno (Hell) and slowly rises to Purgatorio to finally continue the ascension to Paradise-Heaven.

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