mountain elevation –
Coachella Valley at the tip
of brushstrokes
mountain elevation –
a span of wings connect
cliff to cloud
mountain elevation –
my breath in the presence
of deities
photo and words: L. Cooper
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Etch and Scribe 
Beautiful! The first trio is as a painting “with brushstokes”, the second is the union of earth and heaven, and the third one is higher step towards the spiritual element where the voice of the poem feels connected with god(s).
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Thank you! Your comment is truly appreciated and your description is very poetical in its own right – well versed poet!
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Thank you. So glad you like my comment. A well versed poet? Well, that is what you are!
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The idea of progressive elevation after each three verses reminds me of Dante Alighieri’s The Divine Comedy, where he comes out of The Inferno (Hell) and slowly rises to Purgatorio to finally continue the ascension to Paradise-Heaven.
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